[EVENT] Typo Finder

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  1. [GM]Gourdy

    [GM]Gourdy RedFox Games Staff Member

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    for get this post
     

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  4. xSavage21

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    It should say lvl 11 instead of 9 also i had to make a alt for this after seeing this on my bros acc but he had already used his . IGN:HTFzRay RumbleFighter_08252016-184613.jpg
     
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    basically the same as the other one but should say lvl 9 instead of 11 IGN:HTFzRay RumbleFighter_08252016-183130.jpg
     
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    should say at end of the scroll IGN:HTFzRay RumbleFighter_08252016-191713.jpg
     
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    samething for this one RumbleFighter_08252016-193056.jpg
     

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    say haling but should say hailing IGN:HTFzRay
     

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    #4 Over-the-top Piercing
    https://gyazo.com/6e959bc9a6bf643901921975308d67df
    Typo : Missing a full stop on the end
    Re-do : Add full stop ( Always remain a rebel.)

    #5 Stylish Piercing
    https://gyazo.com/ef80b5d887c01153c1aa9264ed33e9ca
    Typo : Missing a full stop on the end
    Re-do : Add full stop ( Always remain a rebel.)

    (Some Extras in-case above mentioned are not accepted)

    #6 Baseball bat
    https://gyazo.com/64fc3ce1c375cf51dbdae023c63750a5
    Typo: Should be "playoffs" instead of "playoff"
    Re-do: "Wear this and advance to the playoffs"

    #7 Dark/Light/Blood-stained Gauze
    https://gyazo.com/ed433afbcb9bbc9d8b4f9801b30c2a34
    Typo: The last word "anyways" should not have an 's' on the end
    Re-do: "I didn't need that eye anyway!"

    #8 Big Silver Rings
    https://gyazo.com/6bc4edbfb3c009c3942a78842e2af4e3
    Typo: "Big hoops never looked so good"
    Re-do : "Big hoops have never looked so good"

    #9 White/Navy Blue/Silver Loafers
    https://gyazo.com/006ea81cc86e7170ad04a7907cd0313a
    Typo: Missing full stop/exclamation mark at the end
    Re-do: "I'm the classy and chic type!"
     
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    1) Shining Stars
    New description: Made out of fallen stars, the power of the cosmos is with you.
    [​IMG]

    2) Head Dress (Orange/Pink/Red)
    New description: A charming lady.
    [​IMG]

    3) Happy UAM
    New description: A User Appreciation Month special token.
    [​IMG]

    4) Happy day Pack
    New name: Happy Day Pack
    New description: A weekly event package.
    [​IMG]

    5) Black/Blonde/Green Doppler
    New description: High winds on the horizon.
    [​IMG]
     
  11. Reflex

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    Hey Gourdy, I've got one more to reach 5 items:

    This one is the Clobber Stick. It has an extra exclamation point after the question mark. "Do you know what time it is?!"

    [​IMG]
     
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    IGN: Virtuoso



    1) Avalon Driver

    Problem: Missing a comma after model.

    Fix: "Venom Driver upgraded model, able to attach gemstones."
    RumbleFighter_08292016-130655.jpg


    2) Cannon Barrel

    Problem: Sentence is missing "a"

    Fix: "This ExoCore transforms one of your fighter's arems into a powerful cannon, able to cause major damage from a distance. This item may be used by all classes."
    RumbleFighter_08292016-132037.jpg



    3) "Put Off" button in store

    Problem: Doesn't make sense

    Fix: Replace Put Off with "Take Off" RumbleFighter_08292016-132741.jpg


    4) Minigames NPC incorrect sentence

    Problem: One of the sentences the NPC says doesn't make sense and has an error.

    Fix: "Ouch... my legs have fallen asleep. Anyone want to take my spot in this game?"
    RumbleFighter_08292016-133017.jpg



    5) "CLOSE" sign in Plaza

    Problem: The sign is missing a "D"

    Fix: "CLOSED"
    RumbleFighter_08292016-133456.jpg
     
  13. rfSexy

    rfSexy Art Potato & Clean Up Crew

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    @Reflex
    An interrobang (!?) is a valid punctuation.

    @Xaltex
    Your last 2 most likely will not count. They're looking for typos in item descriptions.
     
  14. Xaltex

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    @rfSexy Well, considering people have gotten away with using typos in BM's, I was guessing that Plaza would count too.
     
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