My first and very crappy animation

can you just give your opinion on the crappy drawing and be done?

 

That was my opinion, be more realistic and I mightve bought one of sabres claws from you

 

Also no GOOD barber shapes up the back of your neck.. its supposed to fade

 

I like how you try to move the shading around the back of his head but it looks like you were just darkening the area. A good start tho.

 

i just didnt wanna get the thread off topic with what he said

 

and what type do you see in that picture... niqqa naps

 

its weird because like i stated earlier i didnt know how to color each layer. by that i mean i was undecided if i should color one and uplicate that image then change the lineart to fit the sketches underneath or color each one separately. I tried to color each one separately which meant I had to re-shade the hair on each layer which is why its all fkd up and looks like I tried to put a moving shade or something

 

I see where your coming from. It's a difference in tastes I guess. moxie's lineart does have a few weighted tips and lines if you look at some of his lineart but for the most part it's those simple thin lines along with his coloring is why i prefer that line style. but it does do a person well to look into and work with different lineart styles to find what they really want