Some of the combos could be a little more clearer. However, I love the uniqueness of it, Capoeira styled fighting could definitely use some more love. I support this scroll 100%! I hope for its soon release. Some Feedback: Round Arc: I feel this combo will take a slower pace as a combo, the combo itself doesn't move much and would make a great way to not gain damage, but to get your opponent to open up with its good delay and recovery, minus the last hit which would be if you feel that the opponent will let their guard down. 5 Stars for this Combo as the scroll has a lot of movement and might be quick to be punished. Lynx Tail: Very impressed with this one, I can see myself using this one a lot! I would recommend changing the PPKKK to just PPKK for better control of it. Other than that, 5 stars! Sliding: I have a small problem with this one. I do not feel that it will flow well. I can see this combo being one of the most useless in its arsenal. Instead, I recommend changing it to PK instead of KP, the K looks to have a very large recovery time not enough to get through to the next input. I suggest to balance out the speed of this attack, making the backward-knockback slightly shorter than Parkour's. With PK, it would make a good escape priority combo. I should be almost as first as Pencak Silat's KP. 4-Stars! Mallet's Smash: I do not see any problem with this one, very useful and unique. I would say do not make it a BU Juggle for the reason being that the scroll's juggling capabilities are not as good. The first punch is a low hitter, and will be stressful to have to bu-juggle with it. (I can see myself having to P -> P everytime.) Instead make it a overhead block canceller like Blackout's KG. I think it would add some more uniqueness to it, the recovery on the last input can be made better to follow up with another combo. 5-Stars for sure though. Spin Scythe: I would say the only problem with this one is the 3rd and 4th input being the same... looks too repetitive. Maybe shorten it to KKKK, or change up the 3rd or 4th input slightly. I do love how the angle capabilities would be very much like Capoeira. 4-Stars. Scratch Wheel: Absolutely perfect. Very simple and flows smoothly. 5-Stars! Rhino Arc: Basic and innovative counter that matches the scrolls type. 5-Stars. Lynx Whip: This has got to be my favourite part of the scroll! I would only say that the taunt lasts about a second however. I also feel this would be perfect in case you did not want to start the juggle popper! And would give you a chance to play some mindgames and let them open up, or let their guard down. Well done on this one! 5-Stars. Once again, I really enjoyed critiquing this scroll, and I hope you can take my words as a strong basis to further constructing it. I hope to buy it soon! Great job, bro. ~Plot